ANNIE96: Chat Stories App

Interesting idea, neat concept, but it seems unfinished. Choosing the "wrong" choice should result in a longer trip down the wrong path, as opposed to a simple "bad move, agent" alert and chance to retry. More consequences would be interesting. Also, the 3hr "wait to unlock" periods after chapters. It slows storyline and gameplay, completely ruining the narrative. You can pay to unlock the next chapter, which I haven't bothered to do. I just exit the app, and eventually remember to check back later. And finally, the text conversations: less profanity, more descriptions, please. Have the agent describe the scenes to his contacts. While that's not how people talk, it would enhance the scene in the player's mind to have notes like "it's cold here; the pedestrians are bundled against the rain," "I've never seen a place so crowded," etc. -- All in all, solid potential, and I'd encourage the developer to keep trying at this project. I'm still playing this game, I want to see how it ends.

I had the app Yarn. I hated it because you had to be a member and pay to get in. So I decided to go to this app instead. Well don't be deceived. The first pic on here looks nothing like the app. When you read the stories they are not even finished. You can't even search for a book. You have to read what they give ya. AWFUL!! For all those people who want to create a story DON'T GET THIS APP!!!! When you create a story you can fix your mistakes. When you create a story and you are not done you have to submit the story right there. And you can't go back to the story and add to it. You have only to options. Publish it or delete it. That's it. I was busy so I saved my Tory I was writing and guess what it wouldn't let me go back and add to it. I WASN'T EVEN DONE!!!! Don't be deceived by the pics this app is awful!!!

I like the app because it rlly pulls u into the story but the part tht I don't like about the app is tht when is gets to a good part of the story you would have to wait like 24 minutes or something like tht and then people start deleting it because it gets annoying when u have to wait to hear the rest of the story. But besides tht I rlly enjoy the app I would really like to hear about real celebrities and about their scary experiences of stuff they did that scared themselves. I would not like u guys to make us wait to hear the rest of the story plz I really don't want to and I just got the app and I rlly enjoy because I get scared, I little but, bit I also feel mysterious if it actually is real, the stories that u guys come up with or have actually lived through it!!

It's okay, if you want to actually be successful in your business don't require so many purchases to actually enjoy the story. Perhaps have stories that you can only buy, and stories that are free. But having to pay to even view photos isn't fun, and makes the developers look greedy. Even in Hooked, the app that's very similar to yours, you don't have to pay to see photos. If you want business, find different things to pay for rather than taking away from the experience. Good luck with your company! I'll be uninstalling since there are much better and much less costly apps like yours.

I love the idea of a text based story app, but most of them cost money. This one doesn't - pro. However, you cannot save drafts of your stories and come back to them - you have to immediately publish them. Also, if you make typos and accidentally click "add" for the text, you can't fix it. Furthermore, most of the stories on here are utter trash. Many of them aren't even stories and the ones that are aren't sorted into the right categories. And there are too few categories. This could be something great, but it isn't yet.